Today I reached the first milestone. I finally managed to finish the story! Last week, I did some corrections and since then it's been an iterative process until the storie's finishing today. Before bringing it to that thing that hopefully will become a book I will show the story some friends who are a little expert in "things for children" to get some helpful feedback.
After there have been some troubles about my X-Mess card I decided to rework the ears of this funny white creature (some people didn't see the ear as ear). As you can see below I tried all kinds of ears and I think I like some kind of floppy ears like on the bottom right (my second fav are the elephant ears, haha).
Further I developed some of the other characters. The creature in the middle is known from the concept drawings. I love it, so I will give it a little role in the story. The thing in the last picture is new but also very funny and friendly and reminds me a little of Joscha Sauers Yetis or a Goomba. But I guess, if the thing is colored it will look like a slimy meatball.
Cheers, Robert
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